Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Extra Reading Week 10: Native American Tales

When the Rainbow Was Torn

There is a type of flower that is typically white called the cactus flower. Once the flowers would blossom in colors that the rainbow would carry, red, yellow, orange that the rainbow had given them. When the sun would be out, the flowers would tune their faces up to the sky and take in all light. The rainbow had two ends that would meet somewhere on earth. When the ends met everything on earth would be colored by the rainbow. The white cactus flower always would be hopeful that one day the rainbow would color them, but the rainbow never did. It could have possibly been because the cactus flower had many thorns and could hurt the rainbow.

After a heavy rain the rain was full of water and ready to have its ends meet to shower everything but the cactus in its beautiful colors. On its way down to the ground, it was ready to pour when it noticed a hidden cactus plant. In an attempt to pull up, the weight of the water became too much and the rainbow poured water on to the cactus plant.

The thorns on the cactus tried to capture as much of the color as they could and save it for the flowers. The only colors that they were able to catch were red, yellow, and orange, the rest had escaped. The flowers began to bloom in beautiful shades of color.

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Cactus flowers. Source

Storytelling Week 10: Who To Love

Alyssa is crushing hard on the boy with a buzz cut and a bad attitude. No one knew of her secret crush. Heck, it took Alyssa two years to finally accept it. Now she stares at the taut muscles, the buzzed hair, and the "I'm too good to be here" stance by the one and only Parker Reynolds.

Alyssa swoons internally and thinks "What I would do to date him." The only problem is that Parker has a bad reputation for fighting, riding a motorcycle too fast, and being the boy that dads don't want to see their daughter with.

"ALYSSA," her teacher Mr. Connors yells bringing her back to the real world in class. To Alyssa, staring at a cute boy is much more entertaining than learning about the Civil War. As a straight-A student, school comes easy for Alyssa. Turing back to class she answers the question Mr. Connors asks her with the right answer.

As Alyssa drifts off again, she is brought back to the classroom by what Mr. Connors says next.
"Next, I will pair you off to work on the Civil War project. "Jack and Diane. Alyssa and Parker. Carry and Will...." Alyssa is completely taken by surprise and unsure of what she just heard. The world around her has stopped spinning and everyone is staring at her.

"Go find your partner and discuss your assignment," says Mr. Connors. Alyssa makes her way over to Parker and sits beside him. Parker barely acknowledges she is there. Alyssa tries but he just doesn't care. Finally Alyssa says, "How about I do the assignment, we get an A and you just do nothing?"Angry, she returns back to her seat.

When the bell rings signaling class is over, she heads to her locker to get her car keys but is met by someone unexpected. Parker is waiting for her. Unsure of him, she checks to make sure she went to the right spot, which she did. "I'm sorry" says Parker. "I'm having a bad day." They discuss the project and decide to go eat and then get to work on it.

One day of project work became a week. A week became into a month, and before Alyssa knew it, they are dating. Neither one of them has been so happy in their lives. Alyssa finally sees Parker for who he was. He isn't bad, he is just misunderstood.

Alyssa's relationship is going well until the one person she hoped wouldn't find out about them now knows. Her father. He has never liked Parker since he started being the reason for so many police calls. Her father, being the police chief, has to respond to all the calls. Her father knew the kind of trouble that boys like Parker got into.

Alyssa and her father have been arguing for days about Parker, until finally, something changes his mind.

A car driving too fast hits a wet spot in the road. Alyssa is walking along the sidewalk to meet her dad and Parker to discuss their relationship. She is too busy with her thoughts that she doesn't notice the headlights of the car flying toward her. Parker who is walking from the other direction toward her, hears the tires squeal. Alyssa is also unaware of how close Parker is to her. Parker sprints to shove her out of the way of the car. Unfortunately, the car clips Parkers' legs and sends him flying to the ground hitting his head. He is knocked out unconscious. Her father is not able to do anything but watch his daughter's life possibly end. He has 911 on the phone with an ambulance on the way.

Alyssa has some scratches but those would heal. She sits with her father in the waiting room for the love of her life to be okay. As they sit waiting, her father tells her that, Parker and her have his blessing to be together. 

When Parker wakes up, Alyssa shares the news for their relationship. The doctor informs them that, he suffers from a concussion and a broken right fibula but will be able to go home that day.

Her father shakes Parker's hand as they left the emergency room. "I may only know your bad side, but anyone who is willing to put my daughter's life before their own is good in my book." Her father says.

A motorcycle. Source.





Author's Note: The story that inspired me to write this one is called the Bear-Woman. The original story is a Blackfoot Native American story. It is a marriage tale about a woman who has a bear for a lover. The woman had several brothers, a sister, and a father who disapproved. The younger sister tells their father of the older sisters lover. The father and brothers go out and kill the bear enraging the older sister. I decided to use the father and the unaccepted love elements into my own story. I thought having an animal lover would be too strange to make the story more modern. I knew the overall theme of my story but I got stuck trying to make an ending for it. I didn't want anyone to die, unlike in the original story. I typically just allow myself to write and I will let the details sort themselves out. I wanted the story to be longer but I made myself edit it. I can get carried away sometimes. I chose the story I originally read because the title seemed cool. I was completely taken by surprise when I started reading it. I actually had to reread the second paragraph several times because it was not what I was expecting. As the story went on, I could understand why it was titled the way I was. If you are looking for a suspenseful read, than you should definitely look into reading this story.


Bibliography: Tales of the North American Indians by Stith Thompson (1929).


Monday, October 26, 2015

Reading Diary B: Indian Marriage Tales

Bear Woman (con't) 

The older sister returned home in normal form to find her younger sister walking into the house. She lied about her whereabouts and about how she obtained the jackrabbit that the brothers had given to her. The older sister accused her of lying about the rabbit. The older made the younger sister go out and kill a rabbit to prove that she is not lying.

The younger sister prepared and cooked the rabbit. The older sister refused to eat, so the brothers and the younger ate it all. The older sister became angry seeing there was no rabbit left. The older sister threatened to kill the little sister. The little sister grabbed their baby brother and went off through the path the brothers had to her to take. She met her brothers there in the brush. However the older sister was so powerful that she knew what the brothers were up to. She turned herself back into a bear and went to look for her siblings.

When she was about to strike, one of the brothers took a handful of water and turned it into a great lake. The bear had to walk around giving the siblings a chance to get away. The bear caught up to them. The next brother threw a porcupine tail and the bear stepped on it slowing it down. The siblings ran up a tree but the bear followed close behind. The bear threw a large stick up in the tree knocking down four of her brothers.

A little bird called to the children to shoot the bear in the head. One of the remaining brothers shot her in the head causing her to fall to the ground to dead. The four of the brothers that have fallen dead. The brother with the arrows shot the arrows straight up in the air and each one landed in the dead brothers making them come back to life.

After everyone was alive again, they all decided to live in the sky rather than live on the earth. Now each one of them is a different star in the sky. The baby brother is the North Star. The younger sister and the brothers make up the Big Dipper.

The Big Dipper. Source

Reading Diary A: Indian Marriage Tales

Bear Woman

A family with 7 boys and 2 daughters live with only their father because their mother died many years ago. One of the young daughters had many suitors. She had a secret. She had a bear for a lover. When she had to go retrieve wood for the house, she would meet her bear lover. When her father and brother would go out to hunt, she would leave her little sister alone to run to the bears house.

One day, out of curiosity, the younger sister wanted to know why her older sister was gone so long all the time. On her trip, she discovered her sister's secret. The father never knew why his oldest daughter never wanted to marry until his youngest daughter told him about the bear lover. The father didn't accept that he had a bear for  a son-in-law. He told the village of this news and the village set out to kill the bear.

When the older sister had found out that her little sister told on her, the older sister scolded her younger sister. In anger, she told her younger sister to go out and retrieve fresh meat from the dead bears paws. The younger sister was afraid to go outside though because a dog and her puppies tried to bite her. To help her to scare the dogs away, the older sister, who is a medicine woman, painted the younger sister's face to look like a bear.

The medicine woman sister, tanned a hide for the younger sister to take the baby brother and carry him on her back. The sisters went outside to play in the brush, but the older sister warned her sister to not touch her over her kidneys. Forgetting what the older sister had said, she touched her sister's kidneys and she became a bear. The older sister went into the village and killed many people but returned to her true self shortly after.

The sister ran into her brothers when walking through the woods. She explained to them what had happened that day. The brothers told their sister to go inside and they would scatter prickly pear all over the ground but in one spot and she was to go there to pass.

A bear and a woman dancing. Source.